Exciting Story from Summer


I could barely see the rocks. All I knew were that they were sharp, I forgot my shoes, and my phone-flashlight isn't helping much. "Hey how much farther?" I hear. "I can't see to the end!" I shout over the waves crashing on the rocks beneath us. Whenever I came to the beach I was expecting to be in this situation. My friend, Parsa, and I had walked 3 miles to come to these huge rocks that went out about half a mile into the ocean. So, we left the condo at night to try and get across these. The problem was these were all different sizes and were all jagged and misplaced.

"Hey watch out for this!" I hear. Then I fall. "Jack?" I hear. Dazed, I realized that I had fallen onto a smooth rock and almost fallen onto an extremely sharp rock. I manage to get up and then climb up to where Parsa is. "You good?" "Yeah, lets just get to the end of this." It only takes us about 10 minutes to get to the end of the rocks. And after an hour we're back at the condo.

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  1. FoxAugust 31, 2017 at 6:06 PM

    I think you are very lucky to be ok. I like how adventurous you are.

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  2. EDSeptember 11, 2017 at 11:12 AM

    That sounds really scary. I'm glad you're okay.

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